Can we get feedback on our thesis before we send it out?

This web site is not publicly available. This rules are very simple. Do not put information about your fund or your Thesis on a public web site. You can describe your team. You can describe your vision for the future. You can describe your interests. However, I would not direct LPs to a fund web site with any fund information. You can direct LPs to your LinkedIn profile, which should not include details of your fund or fund Thesis.